[Clascomment] OPT-IN: Deep exclusive pi+ electroproduction off the proton at CLAS
David Ireland
David.Ireland at glasgow.ac.uk
Fri May 18 05:03:32 EDT 2012
Dear Kijun at al.,
This is a well written article. I particularly liked the very clear introduction to the physics (speaking as a non-expert).
Just a couple of minor stylistic suggestions, in addition to typos pointed out by others:
* abstract, line 4: "allowed to measure" -> "allowed the measurement of"
* figure 13, caption line 1: "blue solids" -> "blue solid circles"
Best wishes,
Dave
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