[Clascomment] OPT-IN: Deep exclusive pi+ electroproduction off the proton at CLAS

David Ireland David.Ireland at glasgow.ac.uk
Fri May 18 05:03:32 EDT 2012


Dear Kijun at al.,

This is a well written article. I particularly liked the very clear introduction to the physics (speaking as a non-expert).

Just a couple of minor stylistic suggestions, in addition to typos pointed out by others:

* abstract, line 4: "allowed to measure" -> "allowed the measurement of"

* figure 13, caption line 1: "blue solids" -> "blue solid circles"

Best wishes,

Dave


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