[Clascomment] OPT-IN: Hard Two-body Photodisintegration of 3He

Enzo DeSanctis Enzo.DeSanctis at lnf.infn.it
Mon Oct 15 06:42:53 EDT 2012


I found the paper well written. 
I only vthe following formal comments:
- Page 1, line 3:--> ‘… momentum; e.g., n = 3 for…’, that is change the comma after momentum in a semicolon
- Page 2, lines 51-52: did you check that all experiments that have measured exclusive reactions are listed in Table I?
- page 2, line 69: give a ref. of the papers that have shown signatures of scaling.
- page 2, caption of Fig.1, line 2: change ‘HRS spectrometers’ in ‘high resolution spectrometers’.
- page 3, lines 115-116: write ‘vertical drift chambers’ in small letters, as it is done on lines 107-108 for ‘high resolution spectrometers’, on line 134 for ‘time-of-flight’, and on line 136 for ‘scintillatorpaddles’.
- page 3, line 144: drop ‘Below, we give an overview of’ and write ‘In the analysis of the data from E03-101’ as it is done for CLAS experiment on line 177.
- page 4, line 227: are all figures in 11.39% really significant?
- page 5, lines 287-288: drop commas after momentum and sections and change ‘is’ in ‘are’ on line 288.
- page 5, line 294: give the ref. of the papers where the given onset of scaling has observed.



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