[Clascomment] OPT-IN: Hard Two-body Photodisintegration of 3He
Enzo DeSanctis
Enzo.DeSanctis at lnf.infn.it
Mon Oct 15 06:42:53 EDT 2012
I found the paper well written.
I only vthe following formal comments:
- Page 1, line 3:--> â⦠momentum; e.g., n = 3 forâ¦â, that is change the comma after momentum in a semicolon
- Page 2, lines 51-52: did you check that all experiments that have measured exclusive reactions are listed in Table I?
- page 2, line 69: give a ref. of the papers that have shown signatures of scaling.
- page 2, caption of Fig.1, line 2: change âHRS spectrometersâ in âhigh resolution spectrometersâ.
- page 3, lines 115-116: write âvertical drift chambersâ in small letters, as it is done on lines 107-108 for âhigh resolution spectrometersâ, on line 134 for âtime-of-flightâ, and on line 136 for âscintillatorpaddlesâ.
- page 3, line 144: drop âBelow, we give an overview ofâ and write âIn the analysis of the data from E03-101â as it is done for CLAS experiment on line 177.
- page 4, line 227: are all figures in 11.39% really significant?
- page 5, lines 287-288: drop commas after momentum and sections and change âisâ in âareâ on line 288.
- page 5, line 294: give the ref. of the papers where the given onset of scaling has observed.
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