[Clascomment] OPT-IN: Precise Determination of the Deuteron Spin Structure at Low to Moderate Q2 with CLASand Extraction of the Neutron Contribution

[nguler at jlab.org]

Dear Reinhard,

We would like to thank you for the suggestions and also for the encouragement.
We implemented your suggestions and generated the attached report file. The
latest version of the paper is also attached.

Greetings - Sebastian and Nevzat

> Hi All,
>
> This paper is very well constructed, and takes the reader through a
> long story in a clean, structured way.  The paper is didactic enough
> that non-experts can follow what you are doing, which I certainly
> appreciated. While not read it word-for-word,  I do have a few
> comments  on things noticed along the way:
>
> Line 101:  I would use "insofar";  that is the standard expression.
>
> Fig.7+:  Nice use of offset systematic error bands.  This is the first
> time I've seen this used, and I find it effective.
>
> Figs. 10, 13:  The open squares showing SLAC data look magenta, not
> purple.  Changing that would make the word usage consistent with Fig. 14+.
>
> Fig. 15:  A very impressive summary figure.  The only slightly odd
> feel about it is the placement of the left and right panels.  I would
> have swapped them.
>
> Fig 19: the dashed line at zero is nearly invisible, unlike the line
> in Fig.18.  Consider making it heavier.
>
> Line 1130: need to fill in reference.
>
> Line 1137: fix ".."
>
> This paper deserves quick approval from the referees!
>
> Reinhard
>


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