[Clascomment] OPT-IN: Photoproduction of the f1(1285) Meson

[David Ireland]

Hi Reinhard

A very nice paper that is essentially ready for submission.

Here are the minor details that I picked up

- There are a couple of suggestions for the abstract:
- "from proton target" -> "from a proton target"
- the branching fractions should either be all fractions or all percentages, for consistency

- line 304: "for a differential" -> "for differential"

- line 349: space needed between "mechanism" and reference "[34]"

- line 375: "for the each" -> "for each"

- line 397: remove space before comma

- FIG. 7: It may be better to define the symbols in the caption as well as the text. Also, it may be less confusing if the cross-section scales are either ALL linear or ALL logarithmic.

- line 559: "An survey" -> "A survey"

- line 667: Sentence is correct, but open to misinterpretation: "with the exchange of \rho and \omega trajectories." Otherwise "exchange" may imply "swapped"!

- line before equation 12: "is given by" -> "given by"

- line 855: remove spare brace

- line 1186: "presence the" -> "presence of the"

- Just a small alteration to the acknowledgments, since we are now obliged to quote grant numbers on all co-authored publications:
"United Kingdom's Science and Technology Facilities Council (grant number ST/J000175/1)"

Cheers,

Dave