[Clascomment] OPT-IN:Suppression of neutral pion production in deep-inelastic scattering off nuclei with the CLAS detector

[Stepan Stepanyan]

Hello Taisiya,

Thanks for accommodating my comments, hope it improved the paper. Good luck with the publication.

Regards, Stepan

On May 17, 2023, at 4:17 PM, Taisiya Mineeva <mineeva at jlab.org<mailto:mineeva at jlab.org>> wrote:

Dear Stepan,

Many thanks for your comments  to the paper draft. All were implemented. Please, find a couple comments below.

I am attaching again the new paper draft that I just sent earlier, it includes both your comments and Dan's comments.

With best regards,
Taisiya



- page 5, right column, last paragraph. Why nomenclature change? The super ration is defined as R_A in Eq.(1), and on the figures, why A_A^{\pi^0} here? It should be R_A.

Nomenclature changed throughout the paper to  $R_\mathrm{h}$ as defined in Eq.(1) and used in figures.

- page 6, 1s paragraph of the Conclusion, an unclear sentence, "The attenuation (decrease in R^{\pi^0}) increases with …". Perhaps "increase" should come before what in parentheses.

The sentence was rephrased. For clarity, the use of 'attenuation' was further substituted by 'suppression'.
<CLAS_results_on_Neutral_Pion_multiplicities__PRL_Copy.pdf>

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