[Clascomment] OPT-IN:Suppression of neutral pion production in deep-inelastic scattering off nuclei with the CLAS detector

[Taisiya Mineeva]

Dear Stepan,

Many thanks for your comments  to the paper draft. All were implemented.
Please, find a couple comments below.

I am attaching again the new paper draft that I just sent earlier, it
includes both your comments and Dan's comments.

With best regards,
Taisiya



>
> - page 5, right column, last paragraph. Why nomenclature change? The super
> ration is defined as R_A in Eq.(1), and on the figures, why A_A^{\pi^0}
> here? It should be R_A.
>

Nomenclature changed throughout the paper to  $R_\mathrm{h}$ as defined in
Eq.(1) and used in figures.


> - page 6, 1s paragraph of the Conclusion, an unclear sentence, "The
> attenuation (decrease in R^{\pi^0}) increases with …". Perhaps "increase"
> should come before what in parentheses.
>

The sentence was rephrased. For clarity, the use of 'attenuation' was
further substituted by 'suppression'.
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