OPT-IN:First Study of the Nuclear Response to Fast Hadrons via Angular Correlations between Pions and Slow Protons in Electron–Nucleus Scattering

[Daniel Carman]

Dear Sebouh et al.,

I have read through the draft of your supplementary material to support you paper on the 
nuclear response to fast hadrons in eA scattering. I include my comments below.

If you have any questions, let me know.

Regards,
Daniel
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