[Deeppwg] [EXTERNAL] Abstract Submission for APS Meeting

[Richard Capobianco]

Dear Volker,

Thank you for your suggestions. I have attached a revised version of the
abstract based on your comments.

If anyone else has any further suggestions for revisions that I should make
before considering the abstract as approved by the working group, please
let me know. Thank you all for your assistance.

Sincerely,
Richard Capobianco

On Fri, Jan 6, 2023 at 12:15 AM Volker Burkert <burkert at jlab.org> wrote:

> *Message sent from a system outside of UConn.*
>
> Hi Richard,
>
>  Very nice, well written abstract, I have only few minor comments:
>
>    - Please mention the CLAS collaboration in the abstract who took and
>    processed the data you are analyzing.
>    - The polarization of the electron beam is not relevant for your
>    analysis as you measure unpolarized structure functions.
>    - "Data was taken" --> "Data were taken" ("data" is plural of "datum"
>    singular)
>    - "May probe the Boer-Mulders function" --> "Probe the Boer-Mulders
>    function"
>
> Good luck!
> Volker
>
> ------------------------------
> *From:* Deeppwg <deeppwg-bounces at jlab.org> on behalf of Richard
> Capobianco via Deeppwg <deeppwg at jlab.org>
> *Sent:* Thursday, January 5, 2023 11:16 PM
> *To:* deeppwg at jlab.org <deeppwg at jlab.org>
> *Cc:* Joo, Kyungseon <kyungseon.joo at uconn.edu>
> *Subject:* [Deeppwg] [EXTERNAL] Abstract Submission for APS Meeting
>
> Dear All,
>
> My name is Richard Capobianco, I am a graduate student at the University
> of Connecticut, and I would like to present at the upcoming April APS
> meeting in Minneapolis.
>
> I have attached my abstract for comments, suggestions, and approval. The
> deadline for submission is Monday afternoon. Please let me know if you have
> any questions or if any changes are necessary. I appreciate your support.
>
> Sincerely,
> Richard Capobianco
>
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