[ee] draft slides for tomorrow

[Pawel Nadel-Turonski]

Hi Stepan,

Thanks for your comments. I added the labels on page 7. On page 9 the 
fonts were the same, but the lower one was in capitals. I fixed that. 
Making the TCS diagram on page 10 twice larger is not so simple, since 
there really is not much space. I increased its size a little, though. I 
hope people will be able to see. On slide 15, I only see two figures. 
The little one in the background, which goes beyond J/Psi, seems nice, 
though. On page 20, "few other restrictions" essentially means "no other 
restrictions". I just did not want to be so categorical. But we can 
change that if you think it would be better.

Regarding the J/Psi, however, I slightly disagree with you. First of 
all, a discussion of the Hall C experiments was requested by the PAC, so 
we cannot avoid it. But regardless, presenting a fair and balanced 
lab-wide perspective seems quite reasonable to me. And while CLAS is a 
great detector, the different Halls offer various capabilities and one 
cannot plan an experiment in one neglecting the others. I also don't see 
a major problem in suggesting that we may have the first J/Psi proposal 
ready for PAC 40. It will keep us on our toes, and even if we don't make 
it, I don't think anyone will hold it against us. Maybe I can just 
soften the phrasing? :)

Regards,

     Pawel


On 2/23/2012 12:24 AM, Stepan Stepanyan wrote:
> Hi Pawel,
>
> Thanks for your efforts. In general everything is in order. Here few 
> minor comments:
> page 2: first bullet for J/Psi, no need to say J/Psi will be presented 
> to PAC 40,
> just a phrase "study of nucleon gluonic structure in valence region 
> using J/Psi will follow"
> page 2: why we are talking about Hall-C proposal and LOI?
> page 7: add axis labels on plots
> page 9: font for \theta in the last bullet is different from above 
> presented fonts
> page 10: make TCS diagram x2 bigger
> page 15: figures of R, you need only top plot of the 3-plot figure, in 
> PPT it is possible to cut it out and
> make it bigger.
> page 20: what "few other restrictions" are you referring
>
> Regards, Stepan
>
> On 2/22/12 11:41 PM, Pawel Nadel-Turonski wrote:
>> Hello Everyone,
>>
>> Unfortunately I have been sick and things have moved slower than I 
>> had hoped, but at last I can send you a draft of the slides for the 
>> collaboration meeting tomorrow. I hope we can discuss them during our 
>> meeting at 10 am, but if you can't attend, please send comments by 
>> email!
>>
>> Best Regards,
>>
>>     Pawel
>>
>>
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