[Eg6_analysis] draft of my DIS presentation

[Hovanes Egiyan]

Hi Yohann,

Nice talk, here are a few suggestions:

o On the title page: change to "On behalf of the CLAS Collaboration". 
eg6 is not a collaboration.
    And you can put your affiliation right below your name and above the 
"CLAS Collaboration" line.

o I do not think the plot of "Helicity signal" is worth showing, it seems
    to be deviating from zero too much. If all angles are integrated out 
it should be consistent with
   zero to very high (~10^-5) precision. You may have trouble explaining 
these fluctuations beyond
   the error bars.

o Title of the last slide should be "Conclusions" not "Conclusion".

o The last bullet in "Conclusions":  Change  to  "RTPC calibration is 
still being improved". It is
     unclear what you mean by "energy calibrations", and both momentum 
and dE/dx calibrations
     are very unlikely to be final.

Hovanes.


On 04/08/2011 12:12 PM, Yohann Perrin wrote:
> Hello,
>
> This is a draft of my talk at DIS2011 :
> www.jlab.org/~perrin/DIS2011_draft.pdf
>
> Comments and suggestions are welcome.
> Thanks,
> Yohann
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