[g13] NSTAR abstract

[Paul Mattione]

Some suggestions for changes:

1) "QCD-based and inspired models" -> "Constituent quark models and Lattice QCD" (although what you have is probably OK).  

2) "There are host" -> "There are a host" (also, this sentence needs to be tied into the rest of it better: why do we care about polarization observables? because they provide extra constraints/handles on extracting the N* resonances)

3) "give measure of" -> "give a measure of"

4) "Among these observables ... ": I don't think this sentence is necessary. 

5) "In this paper" -> "In this talk"

6) "excess of cross section' -> "increase in the cross section."  I guess we'll learn more about what you mean with this sentence when you show your results next week.  

7) "We regard this work ...": I don't think this sentence is necessary.  

8) 2007 -> 2006 (The vast majority of g13a was in 2006; g13b was in 2007).  

 - Paul

On Jan 24, 2013, at 12:11 PM, ctaylor at jlab.org wrote:

> Everyone,
> 
> I was hoping to present at NSTAR. If possible I would like to go over my
> results with the group Tuesday next week. I have attached my abstract to
> this message for comments.
> 
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