[G14_run] draft of NStar2017 proceeding

[Reinhard Schumacher]

Dear Haiyun,

I read through your nice draft for the N* proceedings article.   Actually, I read through the version that Andy marked up.     I think you should adopt his recommendations.   Here are just a few additional comments:

page 2 bottom:  where you list the 4 beam and target conditions it might good to make an itemized list with separate lines.   I found it a bit confusing to read them all “in line”.

Fig 1 caption: replace “VS” with either “vs.’ or “versus”

Fig 2 and Fig 3:  I think you have these in reverse order compared to the order in which they are cited in the text.   In fact, Figure 3 ought to come first.

SAID curves:  You make use of results from SAID for your comparisons, but I did not see any specific reference to which version of SAID you are using.   People like Igor S.   are sensitive to that.   Can you add a reference to the specific source of the curves you are showing?

Results graphs:   I am a fan of having a thin horizontal line that marks zero asymmetry on all the graphs.  For the G graphs in particular, I would recommend that, since it would let the reader see directly the answer to natural questions like “Is G compatible with zero over the entire kinematic range?”   

Cheers,
Reinhard

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> On Mar 27, 2018, at 12:45 AM, hlu at jlab.org wrote:
> 
> Dear HDIcer,
> 
> I put the draft of nstar2017 proceeding at
> https://www.jlab.org/Hall-B/secure/g14/HLu/publication/nstar2017.pdf.
> Could you please read and give me some feedback.
> 
> CLAS password is needed to access the document, NOT your personal jlab
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> Thank you,
> Haiyun
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