[Halld-physics] Fwd: [EXTERNAL] Abstract for APS April meeting

[Elton Smith]

Forwarding from Barry Ritchie.


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From: Barry Ritchie <Barry.Ritchie at asu.edu<mailto:Barry.Ritchie at asu.edu>>
Subject: [EXTERNAL] FW: Abstract for APS April meeting
Date: January 5, 2021 at 5:10:20 PM EST
To: Elton Smith <elton at jlab.org<mailto:elton at jlab.org>>

Elton, for some reason, I was not permitted to send this set of suggestions to Mariana through the halld-physics exploder. Could you please forward?  ---BGR


Professor Barry G. Ritchie
Department of Physics
Arizona State University
Tempe, AZ　 85287-1504

Telephone: (480) 965-4707
Fax: (480) 965-7954

From: Barry Ritchie
Sent: Tuesday, January 05, 2021 3:08 PM
To: Mariana Khachatryan <marianak at jlab.org<mailto:marianak at jlab.org>>; halld-physics at jlab.org<mailto:halld-physics at jlab.org> Physics <halld-physics at jlab.org<mailto:halld-physics at jlab.org>>
Subject: RE: Abstract for APS April meeting

Mariana, you have an unneeded comma after Hall D in the first sentence. I would suggest the second and third sentences read:

“GlueX uses a  multi-GeV linearly-polarized real photon beam with a solenoid-based large-acceptance detector. The facility completed the initial phase of data taking in 2018 and has many analysis efforts well underway.”

I would change “…analysis efforts towards the search…” to simply “… searches …”.

Since you do not use the abbreviation PWA after introducing the abbreviation, I would eliminate the abbreviation altogether. I also would not start a new paragraph with the final sentence, but simply tack it on to the remainder of the abstract.

Thank you for acknowledging your sponsor(s). A number of the abstracts seem to be lacking that.

---BGR

Professor Barry G. Ritchie
Department of Physics
Arizona State University
Tempe, AZ　 85287-1504

Telephone: (480) 965-4707
Fax: (480) 965-7954

From: Halld-physics <halld-physics-bounces at jlab.org<mailto:halld-physics-bounces at jlab.org>> On Behalf Of Mariana Khachatryan
Sent: Tuesday, January 05, 2021 1:26 PM
To: halld-physics at jlab.org<mailto:halld-physics at jlab.org> Physics <halld-physics at jlab.org<mailto:halld-physics at jlab.org>>
Subject: [Halld-physics] Abstract for APS April meeting

Dear all,

please take a look at the abstract of my invited talk at APS April meeting on “Photoproduction of hadrons with the GlueX experiment”,
and let me know about your comments.
The abstract can be found here:
https://halldweb.jlab.org/DocDB/0048/004836/001/APS_April2021_Abstract.pdf<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/halldweb.jlab.org/DocDB/0048/004836/001/APS_April2021_Abstract.pdf__;!!IKRxdwAv5BmarQ!JNr10DcFppnVGSnHDd_uCTa8AaqAQ-ebclRU3TvEKIIz8nDiFcCKGNxVg7LN6GIN-pe_tw$>

With regards,
Mariana.

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