[Nuclear] April Meeting 2011 abstract

[Yordanka Ilieva]

Dear Rakhsha,

Nicely composed abstract!

I have some minor comments:

Paragraph 1
Line1: I would rephrase the first sentence to make it state the problem 
that your study aims to attack.
Something like " The short-distance structure, short-range correlations, 
and meson-exchange currents in
nuclei are important problems in nuclear physics that still have not 
been resolved.
Line 3: "These processes, together..." - a comma

Paragraph 2
Line 1: "The study of ... excitations, and specifically..., is an 
important..." - two commas
Line 3: "local high-density spots" -  a hyphen
Line 6: "in an excited state"
Paragraph 3
Line 1: "Recent experiments at JLab provide..." or do you mean "A recent 
experiment ... provides"
Line 3: "one or more Delta-isobars"

I would restructure the last paragraph a bit to something like
In the g3a experiment with the CLAS at Jefferson Lab, a high-statistics 
data set was collected using incident photon beam
with energies of 0.5 -- 1.5 GeV on a liquid 3He target. In this work we 
study various photoproduction reactions that contain ...., such as ...
We will discuss preliminary results and future plans.

I am not sure if so many paragraphs are needed in the abstract.

Best regards, Yordanka

On 1/12/11 9:50 AM, rakhsha nasseripour wrote:
> Dear Hovanes, and Nuclear physics working group,
>
> I intend to send the attached abstract to the APS April meeting.  This is a new analysis on g3 data in continuation
> of our previous efforts to study few-body forces.  This analysis is in early stage now, but we hope to have preliminary
> results by the next collaboration meeting, and the APS April meeting.
>
> Please let me know what you think. Suggestions and corrections are very welcome. The deadline for submission
> is this Friday.
>
> Thanks,
> Rakhsha
>
>
>
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