[Nuclear] Fwd: abstract for APS

[burkert]

Nathan,

The way the abstract is written (in present tense) make it sound like 
you are planning the experiment to run now or in the near future. It is 
better to put it into past tense. Also, the sentence "A 6 GeV 
longitundinally polarized electron beam and gaseous 4He target, combined 
with the large acceptance CLAS detector system, augmented by a radial 
time projection chamber for nuclear recoils and small calorimeter for 
forward photons, makes this possible. " (which every German would love 
when expressed in German language) should be broken up into at least two 
sentences. Then you could say more about the radial TPC, the 
calorimeter, and target.

You may also want to add the kinematic covered in the experiment in Q2 
and x. Also, the motivation is not only to see nuclear effects, but also 
to get directly GPD "H" from this experiement on 4He (which is the only 
GPD contributing in leading twist.  Also, it is better to write out 
isospin=0 and spin=0 rather than "lack of (iso)spin."

Best regards,
Volker


  On 1/8/15, 3:46 PM, Kawtar Hafidi wrote:
> Dear All,
>
> This is an abstract to the upcoming APS by Nathan Baltzell. Please 
> send your comments by tomorrow. Sorry for the late notice.
>
> Best,
>
> Kawtar
>
> ---------- Forwarded message ----------
> From: *Nathan Baltzell* <baltzell at jlab.org <mailto:baltzell at jlab.org>>
> Date: Thu, Jan 8, 2015 at 8:43 PM
> Subject: Fwd: abstract for APS
> To: Kawtar Hafidi <kawtar at anl.gov <mailto:kawtar at anl.gov>>
>
>
> Hi Kawtar,
>
> Can you send this abstract to the working group for me?
> Looks like I can't send email from the account I used to sign up to 
> the mailing list previously.
>
> Thanks,
> Nathan
>
>
>
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>> *From: *nuclear-owner at jlab.org <mailto:nuclear-owner at jlab.org>
>> *Subject: **abstract for APS*
>> *Date: *January 8, 2015 at 15:10:11 EST
>> *To: *baltzell at jlab.org <mailto:baltzell at jlab.org>
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>> Sorry, posting to this list is restricted.
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>> *From: *Nathan Baltzell <baltzell at jlab.org <mailto:baltzell at jlab.org>>
>> *Subject: **abstract for APS*
>> *Date: *January 8, 2015 at 15:10:51 EST
>> *To: *nuclear at jlab.org <mailto:nuclear at jlab.org>, deeppwg at jlab.org 
>> <mailto:deeppwg at jlab.org>
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>> Dear Everyone,
>>
>> Attached is an abstract on He-4 DVCS from eg6 for submission tomorrow 
>> for the APS meeting.
>> Please send your comments.
>>
>> Regards,
>> Nathan
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