[Pansophy] C100R-CM-ASSY-COLD-R2

[John Fischer]

Allen,
Here is the first of the 4 Travelers. It is in the new Template and I update the links. I will put it into the approvals folder.
JF

From: Allen Samuels <samuels at jlab.org>
Sent: Tuesday, February 15, 2022 3:15 PM
To: John Fischer <fischer at jlab.org>
Cc: pansophy at jlab.org
Subject: RE: C100R-CM-ASSY-COLD-R2

Understood. I will put a hold on the rest of your travelers until you have a chance to review them.

Allen

From: John Fischer <fischer at jlab.org<mailto:fischer at jlab.org>>
Sent: Tuesday, February 15, 2022 2:52 PM
To: Allen Samuels <samuels at jlab.org<mailto:samuels at jlab.org>>
Cc: pansophy at jlab.org<mailto:pansophy at jlab.org>
Subject: RE: C100R-CM-ASSY-COLD-R2

Allen,
I am afraid they will all have the same template issue. I didn't take that into account.
Thanks,
JF

From: Allen Samuels <samuels at jlab.org<mailto:samuels at jlab.org>>
Sent: Tuesday, February 15, 2022 2:46 PM
To: John Fischer <fischer at jlab.org<mailto:fischer at jlab.org>>
Cc: pansophy at jlab.org<mailto:pansophy at jlab.org>
Subject: C100R-CM-ASSY-COLD-R2

John,


I am sending C100R-CM-ASSY-COLD-R2 back to you. There were several issues with the traveler that need resolution. First and foremost, it is in the old traveler template; best recognized by the NCR emails row in the place of NCR Informative, Dispositioners, and D3 emails. Pansophy no longer accepts new travelers under this old template, and this traveler will need to be updated to the new one.

In addition, I had a few questions regarding the references section. There are several references left without hyperlinks to anything. Should they have documents linked to them, and if so, what should they be? There are also two hyperlinks that come back with blank documents. CRM1207080-1000 Cryogenic Piping<https://jlabdoc.jlab.org/docushare/dsweb/Get/Document-177043/Process%20piping.pdf>, and CRM1207050-0000 Cold Tuner Assembly<https://jlabdoc.jlab.org/docushare/dsweb/Get/Document-177054/cold%20tuner.pdf>. Please update these links to go to the correct documents.

For your convenience, I have attached the traveler. Please use this document in making your revisions, as I have also fixed a number of smaller formatting issues during my review. If you have any questions, please send them to pansophy at jlab.org<mailto:pansophy at jlab.org>.

Allen
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