[Primex2] [Primex] Compton paper - draft

[Evdokimov, Anatoly]

Hi Pawel !

Paper looks really good. I have only few comments - do you need that many word splitting ?

It makes harder to read paper, specially in "Conclusion" where its like every single  line.

Also, is you are using data from Run I you might consider to mention

in acknowledgement grants used for it [NSF (PHY-0079840) DOE No. DE-AC05-84ER40150 (?)

Best,

Anatoly.



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  Hi Pawel,

 Very good progress, congratulations.
 I think we need to look at the authors list once more, also
 I will send some comments, mostly some text typos.

 Ashot


> Attached please find a draft of the Compton article.
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