[Sane-analysis] FF Paper Draft

[Mark Jones]

Hi Anusha,

Good job. Some detail comments follow below.

Some general comments:

Please circulate a version with the red text removed and the green text 
inserted as permanent (you may want to include the fixes below before 
circulating the new version).
In this way we may get a better idea of the final length, but it doesn't 
seem it will fit in the ~5 pp. PRL limit.

Including the titles of the references depends on the journal's 
editorial policies. I think PRC and PRL are OK without titles. In any 
case, titles would make the paper even longer than PRL allows. At the 
last meeting, submission to Phys. Lett. B was suggested. I think it's a 
good option, but then you should use their LaTeX templates instead of 
the APS ones, and check their length limits. Usually Letter papers are 
no longer than 6 pages in all journals.

In any case, I think the paper is ready for posting to the arKiv and 
submission shortly thereafter. At some point, the benefits of revision 
rounds saturate (I think they already have or are close to it) and it 
may be more effective to get referee feedback if some items might still 
need clarification.

Cheers,

Oscar


Comments:

Line 407 "Pp momentum not used because of larger uncertainty". Larger 
than what (other variable's variance or some numerical value)?

L. 509 Should be "Ref. [31]" (RSS). "[32]" is Crawford et al.

L. 531 "tailpiece" is pol. target jargon. You could say ""insert wall" 
or something like that.

L. 616-618 "with equal accuracy" not "accurately", or take out "with". 
Also, is this related to not using Pp, see line 407 above?

L. 656-657 " dE = 0.05%" => "dE/E = 0.05%" (relative error, dE alone has 
energy units). Same for " dP = 0.1%" => "dP/P = 0.1%"

Table I needs a row with the value of E' or Pp at the elastic point.

________________________________________
From: Sane-analysis <sane-analysis-bounces at jlab.org> on behalf of Anusha 
Liyanage <anusha at jlab.org>
Sent: Thursday, March 22, 2018 9:07:57 AM
To: sane-analysis at jlab.org
Subject: [Sane-analysis] FF Paper Draft

Dear All,
Here I am attaching the FF paper for your review. Sorry for being late.

I thought to make it easy to see the changes I have done in the paper 
and therefore used colored texts for major changes.

The texts in ‘red” are to be removed. But did not do yet till you see 
the changes.
The texts in “green” are newly added.

I have re-arrange the Data analysis section and changed the rest 
accordingly. I tried to cutoff some details in the FF paper and refer to 
the NIM paper.

Need to do :
1. Fig. 9 need to be updated.
2. I added the url for the references. Should I add the titles as well 
for the references ? Currently I do not.

Thanks and Best Regards,
Anusha

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