[Clascomment] OPT-IN: Data analysis techniques, differential cross sections and spin density matrix elements for the reaction gamma p -> phi p

[Biplab Dey]

Hi again, Reinhard,
I've tried to address your comments as best as I could:
http://www.slac.stanford.edu/~biplabd/jlab/
I'm aware of the issue of garbled up plots in the printed versions. It would need going back and re-saving those plots as .eps (I think). I'm not in a position to do this right now, but I'll take care of this before the final publication. 
-Biplab






On Wednesday, February 19, 2014 11:03 AM, Reinhard Schumacher <schumacher at cmu.edu> wrote:
 
Hello Biplab,
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>    I read your comments on my comments.  Here is a second iteration on those comments, for the points where I still have a question.  
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>Title: I still feel that the present title is still over-playing the fact that you did a lot of work on the analysis methods.  Every analysis is a lot of work, and unique in some way.   I would remove that first phrase.
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>line 115: Its far from clear to me why you would let a referee dictate the content of 'your' paper.  There is no drawback to mentioning the other paper, and several things to gain.
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>Eq 11:  ah, yes.   I see.
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>line 529: Yes, I see the point, of course.  Perhaps you could rephrase the sentence "The dwindling phase space at higher MKK...."
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>Fig 7:  I downloaded the paper again, and again got scrambled figure legends and labels for this and many other figures.  (???)
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>line 1020: Just reread your sentence about a slow rise with energy of both B and C.  In Fig 31 B is falling and then flattening, and C is rising only if you ignore the most prominent feature of the distribution.  I think you have to qualify your statement.
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>Fig 36:  I still stand by my previous comment, though I could be wrong...  The GJ frame is defined in the rest frame of the V, which is what your label indicates.  But you show the V as moving and the IP at rest.  You want to illustrate a V being created out of the collision of a gamma and the IP, don't you?
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