[Clascomment] OPT-IN: Momentum sharing in imbalanced Fermi systems
Volker Burkert
burkert at jlab.org
Sun May 11 08:02:10 EDT 2014
Dear lead authors,
A surprising and potentially very interesting paper. I have only a few minor comments:
1) page 1, left column, line 6 from bottom: I suggest to replace the "..Fermi energy from
MeV to nev ..." with "..Fermi energy from 10^-9 to 10^+6 eV ...".
2) page 3, middle column, line 6/7: replace "..short-range correlated (SRC) pairs." with
" ... SRC pairs." There is no need to define SRC again as it has been defined on page 1
and used several times.
3) Fig. 3 and caption: The reference to "green" and "yellow" bands seem to be reversed
both in the figure legend and in the caption. "green" (narrow band) should be the 68% c.l.
and "yellow" (wide band) should be the 95% c.l..
4) Reference [6]: For consistency with other CLAS references add (CLAS collaboration) after
the author K. Sh. Egiyan et al. (CLAS collaboration), ....
5) Author list: While the author list is not complete, the way the "lead" authors are listed
in a multi-tier fashion makes it look like that everyone already listed will be a "lead author"
and the remaining CLAS collaboration members will be added alphabetically.
I suggest that only the first tier authors (Hen Sargsian, Weinstein) should be list as lead
authors and all others, including the CLAS collaboration authors should be listed in
alphabetic order. Otherwise the collaboration member deserve an explanation why some
folks who are listed as lead authors have done more for proposing/running/analyzing, etc.
the eg2 experiment then some of the full CLAS collaboration members.
Volker Burkert
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