[d2n-analysis-talk] Long Paper [Version 1.13]

[matt posik]

Hi Dave,

Nice paper!

I have a few comments for v1.13:

Line 1830-1831: "However, our extraction provides a proof-of-principle
measurement ..." --> "However, our extraction using an open geometry
detector provides a proof-of-principle measurement..."

Fig. 37: I would remove the SLAC E143 data points, the error bars are so
large it makes it hard to see everything else that is shown.

Line 1922-1923: "We found that the up quark ratio trends toward
Dyson-Schwinger Equation treatments..."  I don't think you can say this,
the up quark ratio does trend towards DSE, but is also consistent with all
other models displayed in the plot.

-Matt


On Sat, Nov 8, 2014 at 11:50 AM, David Flay <flay at jlab.org> wrote:

> Hi all,
>
> I have made updates to the long paper as per your suggestions -- thanks!
> A number of changes have been made up through the end of section 3.  These
> include:
>
> - Section 2
>    - More in-depth discussion of the LHRS and BigBite hardware in Section 2
>    - Improved description of our trigger setup
>    - Restructuring of subsections relating to the beamline
>    - Brief intro of the 3He target moved to beginning of section 3
>    - Better plots for PID in LHRS (changes pending for BigBite)
>    - Improved PID discussion for the LHRS and BigBite
>
> - Section 3
>    - General improvement in target principle of operation and setup
>    - Reordering of subsections: EPR comes before NMR now
>
> You can find the current version of the paper, v1.13, here:
>
> https://www.dropbox.com/s/2yd2qg650s4ns4l/LongPaper_v1-13.pdf
>
> Please let me know of your comments and suggestions!  Though a few changes
> are to be made regarding BigBite PID plots, I thought it would be useful
> to send out this version now, so as to allow you to make comments on all
> sections.  Please let me know of your thoughts over the coming week.
> Thanks again!
>
> Best regards,
>
> David
>
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