[EIC-eRD110] [EXTERNAL] eRD110 proposal

[Kiselev, Alexander]

  Hi Beni,

  concerning the low-cost you are indeed right. Changed to "cost-effective" in Overleaf.

  Cheers,
     Alexander.

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Abstract:
"The proposed R&D effort in FY22 is necessary to be able to form a decision
that capitalizes on all state-of-the-art technologies to mitigate all of the risks specified above."

-> should be FY23?
-> ... specified below.

at the end of the abstract do you want to add a sentence about radiation hardness of SiPMs?

Section 2:
first sentence: I would remove the word "low-cost". This is still speculation and no relation to other solutions is given.





On 9/30/22 01:21, Ilieva, Yordanka via EIC-eRD110 wrote:

Dear Colleagues,

Please, find attached the eRD110 project R&D proposal. Please, let us know
if you have any comments or suggestions.

With best regards, Yordanka




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