[G12] Fwd: Ad-Hoc review of "Photoproduction of the 3pi mesons in the reaction gamma p ->pi+pi+pi-n with CLAS detector at 6 GeV/c2"

[Paul Eugenio]

Dear g12 folks,

The 3 pi paper is moving to a Collaboration-wide review.  The current version is located on the ad-hoc review site prepared in draft mode with numbered lines (See link below).  While the majority of the changes have been editorial in nature, we have updated the title and updated the abstract to reflect this change.

We are currently preparing the final draft for Collaboration-wide review.   We will be taking into account comments received from Carlos, Susan and any that we have missed from Ken.   We welcome any additional input.

Direct paper link:
https://www.jlab.org/Hall-B/shifts/admin/paper_reviews/2019/3pi_draft_draftmode-1589582-2019-08-05-v5.pdf

Ad-hoc review site:
https://www.jlab.org/Hall-B/shifts/index.php?display=admin&task=paper_review&rid=1589582&operation=view


yours very truly,

Paul


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Prof. Paul Eugenio
Florida State University
Department of Physics
Tallahassee, Florida,  USA 32306

(850) 644-2585
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Begin forwarded message:

From: Raffaella De Vita <Raffaella.Devita at ge.infn.it<mailto:Raffaella.Devita at ge.infn.it>>
Subject: Re: Ad-Hoc review of "Photoproduction of the 3pi mesons in the reaction gamma p ->pi+pi+pi-n with CLAS detector at 6 GeV/c2"
Date: August 15, 2019 at 5:57:35 AM EDT
To: Paul Eugenio <peugenio at fsu.edu<mailto:peugenio at fsu.edu>>
Cc: Barry Ritchie <Barry.Ritchie at asu.edu<mailto:Barry.Ritchie at asu.edu>>, Alessandra Filippi <filippi at to.infn.it<mailto:filippi at to.infn.it>>, Florian Hauenstein <hauenst at jlab.org<mailto:hauenst at jlab.org>>

Dear All,
First of all, I would like to thank very much the ad-hoc committee for the accurate and efficient review of this paper.

Paul, as soon as the final draft of the paper, with the latest corrections by the review committee, will be uploaded on the review web page, I will start the Collaboration-wide review.
Best regards,
Raffaella

On 15 Aug 2019, at 01:11, Paul Eugenio <peugenio at fsu.edu<mailto:peugenio at fsu.edu>> wrote:

Dear Barry,

We will look more into editing the graphs to improve B/W readability.

Thank you.


Paul


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Prof. Paul Eugenio
Florida State University
Department of Physics
Tallahassee, Florida,  USA 32306

(850) 644-2585
peugenio at fsu.edu<mailto:peugenio at fsu.edu>




On Aug 14, 2019, at 1:00 PM, Barry Ritchie <Barry.Ritchie at asu.edu<mailto:Barry.Ritchie at asu.edu>> wrote:

Dear Raffaella and Paul,

The ad hoc committee has reviewed the response to our previous comments.

We find the response is satisfactory, though we note a few corrections and comments below. We fully understand the issue with not being able to edit the figures. However, we would suggest that the authors note that, in general, curves and points in a figure always should be distinguishable in black-and-white to ensure all readers will be able to interpret the figure; color can then be added, if desired.

The committee believes that the paper is ready for the next stage of review.

Sincerely yours,

Barry


CORRECTIONS AND COMMENTS:

Line 15: “established” misspelled
 Line 62: “CLAS in 2008. A beam of circularly-polarized tagged…” Remove  “experiment” and add hyphen to circularly-polarized.

 Line 64: Use “six” rather than “6”. Also, note that the L in HyCLAS is capitalized.

 Line 113:  Response to question on item 113: The incident photon range used should be the minimum and maximum tagged photon energies, not a weighted-average, etc.


Professor Barry G. Ritchie
Department of Physics
Arizona State University
Tempe, AZ 85287-1504

Phone: (480) 965-4707
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