[Pansophy] C100R-CM-ASSY-COLD-R2

[Allen Samuels]

John,


I am sending C100R-CM-ASSY-COLD-R2 back to you. There were several issues with the traveler that need resolution. First and foremost, it is in the old traveler template; best recognized by the NCR emails row in the place of NCR Informative, Dispositioners, and D3 emails. Pansophy no longer accepts new travelers under this old template, and this traveler will need to be updated to the new one.

In addition, I had a few questions regarding the references section. There are several references left without hyperlinks to anything. Should they have documents linked to them, and if so, what should they be? There are also two hyperlinks that come back with blank documents. CRM1207080-1000 Cryogenic Piping<https://jlabdoc.jlab.org/docushare/dsweb/Get/Document-177043/Process%20piping.pdf>, and CRM1207050-0000 Cold Tuner Assembly<https://jlabdoc.jlab.org/docushare/dsweb/Get/Document-177054/cold%20tuner.pdf>. Please update these links to go to the correct documents.

For your convenience, I have attached the traveler. Please use this document in making your revisions, as I have also fixed a number of smaller formatting issues during my review. If you have any questions, please send them to pansophy at jlab.org<mailto:pansophy at jlab.org>.

Allen
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