[PEPPo] PAC proposal punchlist

[Arne Freyberger]

I've attached a version of the r7 proposal with the requested edits(#5 
and #9).   look for "%%% new apf start" and "%%% new apf end" which 
signal where my edits start and end.

Arne

On 06/29/2011 12:25 PM, Joe Grames wrote:
> Dear PEPPo Collaborator:
>
> _Based on today's meeting here is our remaining punchlist regarding 
> version 7:*
> *_
> 1. (*Larry*) - P10.  Clarify "(un)polarized" with respect to Eq. 3 and 
> Eq. 4.
>
> 2. (*Arne*) - P12.  Update Fig. 2 to include spin rotator solenoids 
> and/or send Joe file to do it.
>
> 3. (*Larry*) - P15. Change Table 1 caption to reflect "beam and 
> machine parameters in region 0".  Please add row above "accelerating 
> frequency" that lists the "cw bunch frequency" as 499 MHz.
>
> 4. (*Larry*) - P21. Change Table 2 caption to reflect "PEPPo beam 
> parameters in region 1", and eliminate first 11 rows
>
> 5. (*Arne*) - P15. Introduce E166 experiment on p.14 before "The 
> details of each region..."
>
> 6. (*Larry*) - P18. Increase size of Fig. 8, as possible, so text more 
> readable
>
> 7. (*Eric*) - P28. Generate new Fig. 18 of only central crystal w/ 
> more readable axes
>
> 8. (*Larry*) - P38. Follow text which says "two re-conversion target 
> settings" add "(1mm, 2mm)"
>
> 9. (*Arne*) - P39. After first sentence of section 7, provide text to 
> say we propose to do during 12MSD; should go into abstract too?
>
> 10. (*Joe/Eric/Larry*) - Joe will re-write section 4 being atypically 
> succinct, then send to Eric for edits and figures adjustments and then 
> to Larry by very early Thursday AM EST.
>
>
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