[PEPPo] PAC proposal punchlist

[Joe Grames]

Dear PEPPo Collaborator:

_Based on today's meeting here is our remaining punchlist regarding 
version 7:*
*_
1. (*Larry*) - P10.  Clarify "(un)polarized" with respect to Eq. 3 and 
Eq. 4.

2. (*Arne*) - P12.  Update Fig. 2 to include spin rotator solenoids 
and/or send Joe file to do it.

3. (*Larry*) - P15. Change Table 1 caption to reflect "beam and machine 
parameters in region 0".  Please add row above "accelerating frequency" 
that lists the "cw bunch frequency" as 499 MHz.

4. (*Larry*) - P21. Change Table 2 caption to reflect "PEPPo beam 
parameters in region 1", and eliminate first 11 rows

5. (*Arne*) - P15. Introduce E166 experiment on p.14 before "The details 
of each region..."

6. (*Larry*) - P18. Increase size of Fig. 8, as possible, so text more 
readable

7. (*Eric*) - P28. Generate new Fig. 18 of only central crystal w/ more 
readable axes

8. (*Larry*) - P38. Follow text which says "two re-conversion target 
settings" add "(1mm, 2mm)"

9. (*Arne*) - P39. After first sentence of section 7, provide text to 
say we propose to do during 12MSD; should go into abstract too?

10. (*Joe/Eric/Larry*) - Joe will re-write section 4 being atypically 
succinct, then send to Eric for edits and figures adjustments and then 
to Larry by very early Thursday AM EST.
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