[PEPPo] Nearly Final Version of the Proposal

[Arne Freyberger]

Last minute Comments:

    * abstract line 2: replace "to a source" with  "for a source"
    * abstract next to last line:  permanent?  is anything permanent?  
      I would remove it:  ..."the design of a polarized positron source
      for CEBAF".
    * Page 7 line 2:  "needed circularly polarized..." change to
      "prerequisite circularly polarized..."
    * Page 7 2nd paragraph, last line:  put ELIC first in the list since
      it is NP related: "such as ELIC and Super-B, and for condensed
      matter physics.
    * Page 21, table 2: remove the lines that are in Table 1: lines 1
      through 11.  Change the caption to read: Beam and machine
      parameters at the positron production target (T_1).

I'll read again, but that is what popped out the first time through.  Do 
we need a summary?   As it stands right now it ends with the run 
plan/beam time request.   I did not read the appendices.

Arne

On 06/28/2011 04:06 PM, Lawrence S. Cardman wrote:
> Folks:  attached please find a version of the proposal that includes 
> all changes I have received as of noon today, and the response of the 
> writers to comments you sent.  As we are nearing the very end, I will 
> not post the Latex sub-files this time - only the full proposal file 
> (and all the figures).  The relevant files are posted at  
> http://www.jlab.org/~cardman/ in the Prop-e+28JUN11/ directory. The 
> proposal and final edits to it will be discussed during tomorrow's 
> teleconference, slated to start at 10:30 AM.  If you have specific 
> changes to suggest, please refer to the page and line numbers of the 
> pdf file attached, and, ideally, provide suggested changes.  We MUST 
> converge by Thursday evening as the proposal must be submitted by Friday.
>
>                                                                                                   
> Larry
>
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