[PEPPo] Nearly Final Version of the Proposal

[Lawrence S. Cardman]

Arne - all your comments make sense except perhaps the last one.  I'm 
not quite sure who is using the information in the target for what.  
There was at least one request earlier to add a line (the normalized 
emittance).  So I'd suggest bringing up this one issue at tomorrow's 
teleconference.  Perhaps we should have one table for the beam emerging 
from the existing source (at the entrance to the "switchyard" dipole) 
and then a second table (or two parts to a single table) summarizing the 
beam properties entering the production target T_1.

                                                                         
                                                                 Larry


On 6/28/2011 8:19 PM, Arne Freyberger wrote:
> Last minute Comments:
>
>     * abstract line 2: replace "to a source" with  "for a source"
>     * abstract next to last line:  permanent?  is anything
>       permanent?   I would remove it:  ..."the design of a polarized
>       positron source for CEBAF".
>     * Page 7 line 2:  "needed circularly polarized..." change to
>       "prerequisite circularly polarized..."
>     * Page 7 2nd paragraph, last line:  put ELIC first in the list
>       since it is NP related: "such as ELIC and Super-B, and for
>       condensed matter physics.
>     * Page 21, table 2: remove the lines that are in Table 1: lines 1
>       through 11.  Change the caption to read: Beam and machine
>       parameters at the positron production target (T_1).
>
> I'll read again, but that is what popped out the first time through.  
> Do we need a summary?   As it stands right now it ends with the run 
> plan/beam time request.   I did not read the appendices.
>
> Arne
>
> On 06/28/2011 04:06 PM, Lawrence S. Cardman wrote:
>> Folks:  attached please find a version of the proposal that includes 
>> all changes I have received as of noon today, and the response of the 
>> writers to comments you sent.  As we are nearing the very end, I will 
>> not post the Latex sub-files this time - only the full proposal file 
>> (and all the figures).  The relevant files are posted at 
>> http://www.jlab.org/~cardman/ in the Prop-e+28JUN11/ directory. The 
>> proposal and final edits to it will be discussed during tomorrow's 
>> teleconference, slated to start at 10:30 AM.  If you have specific 
>> changes to suggest, please refer to the page and line numbers of the 
>> pdf file attached, and, ideally, provide suggested changes.  We MUST 
>> converge by Thursday evening as the proposal must be submitted by 
>> Friday.
>>
>>                                                                         
>>                           Larry
>>
>>
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